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Learner Response - Editing

    Editing Learner Response


1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher

  • Excellent response to the brief - creative and engaging (Although perhaps without the additional shot at the end!)
  • Good pace to the conversation and two moments of superb continuity editing - the initial door opening and the glove on table. Match on action is perfect
  • Could perhaps have added soundtrack and audio level, erratic in one shot.
2) Type up your feedback from fellow students:
    
    WWW:
- Good narrative and met the brief perfectly
- Match on action and 180 rule was good
- Good editing   

    EBI:
- Add more shots to have transition more smooth
- Audio issues

3) Now reflect on your video. Did you meet the brief and successfully include the three key editing aspects we have learned?

I think I meet the brief well. I felt like I've done my best but with some oversight with some easy mistakes. Its was hard to think of improvement which means that my editing was good. But the mistakes I made during the brief will help me move forward with my next project.

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