1) Type up your teacher's feedback in full plus a summary of the comments you received from other students in the class. Is this about Formula 1 or e-gaming? Might need to clarify this The lighting on you isnt great (and shot quit grains as a result) but The shot set up woth the screen in the background is excellent The opening is interesting - interview clips over black screen interspersed with dramatic shots. I think is just about worth but.. Dont repeat a clip 30 seconds later! This largely meets the brief but needs a bit of thought in terms of the real coursework WWW: Great camera shots mise-en-scene transitions and clips creative interpretation of a montage EBI: Lighting Audio Repeating clip 2) Using a combination of your own reflection on the preliminary exercise and the feedback you were given, write three WWW bullet points and three EBI bullet points for your TV documentary interview. WWW Dramatic opening Good mise-en-scene with the props in the background EBI Audio Not us