Learner Response: Good opening with itv indent and music/graphic Voice over hard to hear, need to redo it Tone of voice-over tone and script sounds more like a player instead of a journalist Good interview - BUT need more detail (who is interviewee, why they are there) Graphic of interviewee name could've been better (what is the F1 branding, can you recreate it) Need more interviews Too short (need to meet 3 mins) go back to brief and read through minimum requirements With more interviewee and new voice over - documentary will be stronger Once added the details above - make sure you go through the little things (length, audio levels, graphics and captions, etc) Improvements: Need more better interviews and more interviewee (better graphics, better explanation) Proportion the documentary (section for explaining, game play, introduction, AS WELL AS EXPLAINING SO THE AUDIENCE GETS THE MESSAGE CLEAR) Meet the brief as well as changing the tone and script for voice over