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Documentary Rough Cut Learner Response

 Learner Response:

  • Good opening with itv indent and music/graphic
  • Voice over hard to hear, need to redo it
  • Tone of voice-over tone and script sounds more like a player instead of a journalist
  • Good interview - BUT need more detail (who is interviewee, why they are there)
  • Graphic of interviewee name could've been better (what is the F1 branding, can you recreate it)
  • Need more interviews
  • Too short (need to meet 3 mins)
  • go back to brief and read through minimum requirements
  • With more interviewee and new voice over - documentary will be stronger
  • Once added the details above - make sure you go through the little things (length, audio levels, graphics and captions, etc)

Improvements:
  • Need more better interviews and more interviewee (better graphics, better explanation)
  • Proportion the documentary (section for explaining, game play, introduction, AS WELL AS EXPLAINING SO THE AUDIENCE GETS THE MESSAGE CLEAR)
  • Meet the brief as well as changing the tone and script for voice over


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