C inematography: Learner Response 1) Type up your feedback/comments from your teacher: Excellent soundtrack and build up of tension - nice to get a different feel and effect to the same shots as other productions. A few labels incorrect or missing (e.g. some camera movement not labelled) and late "big close up" is perhaps more of a simple close-up I like what you tried with the ending but perhaps if needed something more (a shot? sound?:) to really give the audience a pay-off. 2) Type up your feedback from fellow students. Some text and naming was wrong, Music didn't build up tension, framing over the shoulder shots and other, good range of shots to tell narrative, nice sound effect. 3) Now reflect on your work and write your own summary of the comments and feedback you have received. Write three WWWs and three EBIs. WWW: Good camera movements to tell narrative Nice array of shots Good way of utilizing editing to make it clear for the audience EBI: Some text and naming w...